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as the light eases
and the silence dims
strain never ceases
while two strive on faded rims
thoughts hidden by guise
liquid as they drip
the burning of my eyes
the distance of their grip
inexorable as they grind
erosion of the soul
in the passing of my mind
apprehension of control
evanescence of time
complications of desire
impulses to supress
wallowing in the mire
fretting to impress
the silence of the flames
sentiments that consume
forever will they maim
©2005-2009 ~AmegarixAoi
:iconamegarixaoi:

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A short poem about negative sentiments.

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:iconangelesevalion:
I've already told you that I am left speechless. I don't care what you think of your poetry, coming from me: I believe it's wicked awesome. I love this, and I'd say more, but I haven't the brain cells.

:batman: :blackrose: X3;
:iconamegarixaoi:
Thanks, I dont know how to respont to your flattery. :worship:

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"'Thou shalt not kill.' Remember? What kinda church man are you anyway?"
:iconangelesevalion:
Good. I finally left you speechless instead of the other way around. :P Nyeh.... You'll one day come up with something awesome to say, just like I will. I'm still going to hurt you badly for that whole "Wannabe Poet" crap.... *tackles* I KILL IT! :batman:


:blackrose:


x.X; I watched the first and second batman movies last night.... and I'm STILL on a batman binge. . . . I need to start, like.... a support group or something. O__O
:iconwiccan-angel:
thats beautiful

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:iconamegarixaoi:
Thank you =)

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"'Thou shalt not kill.' Remember? What kinda church man are you anyway?"
:icontaralitha:
It's very beautiful. Meandering, but still direct, the dark mood it gives off is charming!

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Breathe.
:icondkami:
The dark edge is perfect here, because you give it life and movement and it isn't too "this is it". It flows very fluidly, very smoothly, and I love the choice of words within this piece. A definite :+fav: for me!
:iconamegarixaoi:
I really appreciate the fav, and your compliments alike =) Thank you. Your interpretation flatters me.

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"'Thou shalt not kill.' Remember? What kinda church man are you anyway?"
:iconbanditwriter:
I like how this one really flows...it's nice to read.

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"Be so good they can't ignore you."

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